Friday, June 05, 2009

Keep your numbers mounting (part 51)...

55 Fiction Fridays

Curtis had a set schedule.
Wwake at 5, shower,
Toast with strawberry jam, coffee for breakfast,
Catch the train, at the bank by 8.
But one day, on the platform, he had an inspiration, and
Curtis stood still and let the subway pass him by.


Ever after, Curtis never missed what he had left behind.

POLT Listening to "Do You Thing" by Basement Jaxx

"What's the matter with you?" "He's got razor burn on his balls." - Brian, Queer As Folk

6 comments:

Tam said...

I like that. Well done.

Alice Audrey said...

Ah, the shallow life. So busy. So vital. So easily abandoned.

G-Man said...

Polt....A bit on the philosophical side today eh?...Me Likey!!!
Thanks for this 'Serious' 55 brother.
I appreciate your visiting and contributing on this beautiful Friday.
Have a Great Week-End...G

Michelle M. said...

Yay - Curtis escaped the daily grind. Now I want to know what happened next...

Tam said...

Michelle: He definitely needs to post a continuation. Find a picture that shows how Curtis's life changed.

john said...

One of your best EVAR! Really impressive Polt, you totally need to tell us what happens next.