Friday, February 08, 2008

Keep your numbers mounting (Part 17)...

55 Fiction Fridays

The pillow remains.
Still warm, from his body.
Still moist, from his persperation.
Still fragrant, from his cologne, skin, sweat, our sex.
I can see him there, even now,
Grimacing in ecstacy, purring throat thick with lust.
Breathing labored, deep. Moaning.
Calling out, my name, God's name, incoherent.
He's gone, but the pillow still remains.






POLT Listening to "Superstition" by Stevie Wonder

Hey, Jacky, as I once said to Celine Dion, "Why the long face?" Karen, Will & Grace

6 comments:

lime said...

oooh, very nicely done!

Little Wing said...

Here from the G-Mans place, wow, I love this!
How sensual, how erotic!
Hope you are feeling better soon!

SignGurl said...

You are great at 55's! Nicely done.

Anonymous said...

Who knew you were such a romantic, you big balooga! You must have a big heart too. After reading this I'm getting a stiff feeling and yes it is in a good way;)Ed

G-Man said...

Polt...
Very desriptive, very sensual...
You have a great way with words young man. Thanks for playing, and please continue sharing your talent with us all..
And take care of yourself and get better...G

smarmoofus said...

Sensual, yes. But wistful, too. You made me miss him. Very nicely done.

-smarmoofus